Excerpt from the Romantic Drama WHAT BECOMES OF THE BROKENHEARTED

Asbury Park, New Jersey


After her bathroom trip Ivy went to a concession stand and bought a ridiculously expensive bottle of water. Then she went looking for Grayson.

She spotted him near the boardwalk rail, standing with his back to her. It looked like he was talking to a couple. She headed his way, and as she got closer, she recognized the woman from the photo Grayson showed her. It was his ex-wife, Renee. And she was holding that guy’s hand, so he must be her new fiancé.

Ivy slowed her stride. Okay, wow…

She felt bad for Grayson. This had to be an awkward and hurtful moment for him. She wondered if his ex understood that, or if maybe Renee was feeling some satisfaction at Grayson seeing her with her new man. Some women were like that. Some women liked pouring salt into wounds.

As she neared the group Ivy considered the situation. Grayson was a nice guy. He was a good father, for sure. In spite of what he’d said about looking forward, she had a sense that he still had residual feelings for his ex-wife. So running into her with her new guy must suck for him.

Ivy thought that Grayson shouldn’t have to walk away from this encounter feeling hurt or low. She decided that she would do something about that.


“Is she waving at you?” Renee asked William.

William said, “Uh-uh, I don’t know her.” He answered Renee quickly, the way a man will when he’s trying to deflect potential trouble.

Grayson looked around, and saw Ivy approaching.


Boardwalk Babe copy

Ivy was throwing an extra sway into her stride as she walked and sipped from a bottle of water. Heads all around – male and female – were turning to watch the show. Watching her hips play their music, Grayson felt like he was going to have a heart attack now for sure.

When Ivy reached them she took his hand, smiled up at him, and in a voice that oozed like warm honey, said, “I’m ready to go in the water whenever you are, Grayson.” Then she looked at Renee and William and said sweetly, “Hello.”

Now it was Grayson’s turn to make the introductions. As he did, he almost laughed at William trying to keep his tongue from rolling all the way down to the boardwalk wood.

And as for Renee…how did that commercial go?

Introducing your ex-wife to a babe hotter than the sun: Priceless.





Posted on May 24, 2013, in Books and tagged , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 4 Comments.

  1. Reblogged this on Aja and commented:
    One of my favorites. Get your copy!

  2. ❤ this scene so much. Ivy's da bomb.

  1. Pingback: Excerpt from the Romantic Drama WHAT BECOMES OF THE BROKENHEARTED | Author Mel Bynum

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